Fragments #21 Aroused By Blood
God Engine Fragments #21: Power of Eros~~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
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== COMMENTARY ==
I don't even know what to write for commentary. Probably because VALENTINE'S DAY IS AROUND THE CORNER! Dammit! I don't even have art ready for the season of bitterness! Yikes! I spent my whole Sunday playing video games, instead of prepping for broken hearts day. I'm going to start working hard once I get home.
You'd think Kyr's just silly strong, but actually, lore-wise Patrician's are incredibly strong compared to humans. See how Dirge can wield a two-handed weapon with just one arm and move lightning fast? However, there's this human Aimo is fighting, and he's giving Aimo a hard time; seems he's skilled with dealing with Patricians despite being a mere human. We're going to see him again in the future to come without going to spoiler territory.
Just dumping this bit of world building/lore if you can call it that. I'm taking some lessons in writing, and the lesson: Show vs. Tell. I'm having a hard time with this as I've learned that most people don't have enough attention to read long-winded dialogue and most of my scripts have long dialogues that need be trimmed. The professor says there's no shame in telling if a character is just going to get a glass of water, but bare in mind the attention of the reader. At least in manga, you can just draw and show to express instead of telling. The trouble is constructing a page to show/tell about lore and topics that's new.
== GOD ENGINE UPDATE ==
Release of God Engine will be on my birthday, AKA the day my Pixiv's first upload. I'm thinking of just doing a bi-weekly thing. I timed my progress and it took 14-days, from front-cover to last page of the chapter. A chapter contains at least 5-pages minimum.
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== COMMENTARY ==
I don't even know what to write for commentary. Probably because VALENTINE'S DAY IS AROUND THE CORNER! Dammit! I don't even have art ready for the season of bitterness! Yikes! I spent my whole Sunday playing video games, instead of prepping for broken hearts day. I'm going to start working hard once I get home.
You'd think Kyr's just silly strong, but actually, lore-wise Patrician's are incredibly strong compared to humans. See how Dirge can wield a two-handed weapon with just one arm and move lightning fast? However, there's this human Aimo is fighting, and he's giving Aimo a hard time; seems he's skilled with dealing with Patricians despite being a mere human. We're going to see him again in the future to come without going to spoiler territory.
Just dumping this bit of world building/lore if you can call it that. I'm taking some lessons in writing, and the lesson: Show vs. Tell. I'm having a hard time with this as I've learned that most people don't have enough attention to read long-winded dialogue and most of my scripts have long dialogues that need be trimmed. The professor says there's no shame in telling if a character is just going to get a glass of water, but bare in mind the attention of the reader. At least in manga, you can just draw and show to express instead of telling. The trouble is constructing a page to show/tell about lore and topics that's new.
== GOD ENGINE UPDATE ==
Release of God Engine will be on my birthday, AKA the day my Pixiv's first upload. I'm thinking of just doing a bi-weekly thing. I timed my progress and it took 14-days, from front-cover to last page of the chapter. A chapter contains at least 5-pages minimum.
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Comments (2)
Or you could say, "I got penetrated by Dirge."
A violent arousal… I can dig it. And, yeah, to Show vs. Tell is what was drilled into me in my Creative Writing courses. I'm bad at it…